This Love is Forbidden
Always to remain hidden
truth's light will never reach
The softest rays won't ever breach
I can't stop this feeling
This Love will never be Healing
I torture myself with Her Daily
Just for a chance, Maybe (Just Maybe)
Unable to express
I Compress
No One ever need know this
She won't care
And I don't dare
If I never try, I'll never fail
Someday she may know the Love I have for Her
(someday she may)
But for Now I'll live with my Hurt
Let Her live her Life in peace
As Mine is missing a peice.
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This poem I wrote during my emo stage. I know...I was lame. Still am. But I wrote this when I realized that I still have intense feelings for the girls of my dreams. She helped me through my emo none sense. But yes, I don't beleive she ever read this one. Bare with me, its lame, it rymes, and it has the structure of a kindergarder poem. Critique it! Tell me how to make it better!
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Secondly, The poem is breathtaking. It is not "emo" at all, just simply expressive and lovely in it's simplicity. Why do all of my friends have such ways with words? I want so much to write and express myself in this way, but I just fall sort. Your's and Olivia's however are just awe inspiring. I really don't know what else to say here, sorry that I am lacking in critcism. I find that it is hard to find anything wrong with the poems that Olivia and you write.
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